Music Video Second Draft

Things we need to add and improve on:

• Shorten the girl's bedroom scene, which goes on too long with too many unnecessary shots.
• Arrange the cuts so the film is more in time to the music.
• Recreate the opening with a shot of the corkboard to clarify the use of the photographs
• Use a shot of the bridge photograph on the corkboard instead of just cutting to the photo
• Fade out the music at the end
• Shorten some of the beach shots to make the ending more concise